The story that was so nice, WDTVA used it
twice!
Truth be told, "
Allowance Day," an enjoyable enough episode on its own merits, would probably be of relatively nominal interest today were it not for
Ken Koonce and
David Weimers' notorious decision to reuse the exact same plot for
an episode of
TaleSpin.
Courtesy of Greg Weagle, there already exists one (metaphorically)
side-by-side comparison of these two tales of time-tampering. Greg
mounts a full- (or at least half-) throated
defense of "The Time Bandit" but appears to have a relatively lukewarm
opinion
of "Allowance Day." Personally, I think that both versions of the
story have their positives and negatives, but there comes a point in
both tales at which the
tone of the proceedings dramatically diverges, which makes the key difference in how I view the episodes.
The
genesis of the plot rehash here may be a bit more intriguing than many
of us think. The credits for "Allowance Day" gave story
acknowledgement, as well as a writing co-credit, to
Alan Burnett, so it is quite possible that the basic idea was his. The credits for "The Time Bandit," however, mention
only Koonce
and Weimers. Even granted Disney's famed predilection for claiming
writers' creations as its own "for infinity and beyond," wouldn't
Burnett have merited mention for birthing the
TaleSpin tale as
well? Was there some dispute that caused Burnett's name to be dropped
from "Bandit"? I can't help but notice that Burnett stopped working for
WDTVA in 1990, after doing several
TaleSpin scripts and writing
DuckTales: The Movie. Perhaps this was simply because he had too much to do helping to get
Batman: The Animated Series up to speed, but the coincidence is intriguing... and, if you don't mind me saying so, not a little troubling.
Actually, Carl Barks may have to be granted pride of place over
any of the writers involved here, since his story "
Wishing Stone Island"
(WALT DISNEY'S COMICS AND STORIES #211, April 1958) turns on the idea
of HD&L using a fake news broadcast to trick their Uncle Donald
(who, ever so conveniently, has recently become obsessed with the notion
of "good luck charms," presumably to counteract his frequently rotten
luck) into believing that legendary "wishing stones" have been found on a
remote island. Lending at least a bit of credence to the notion that
the second-season
DT Nephews may have suffered a slight downtick
in intelligence, Barks' HD&L wisely use a go-between to deliver
the fake message, whereas the
DT Dewey simply uses his regular voice. Even
Baloo knew enough to get Broadcast Sally to deliver
his message.
The
"wishing stone" whopper wasn't created with any malice -- or scooter,
or any other tangible object -- aforethought; the boys simply thought
that it would make a good April Fool's Day gag. Also unlike "Allowance
Day," the consequences have no global implications. The
local implications, however, promise to be massive, since the crazed Donald literally
sells the Ducks' house
to get the funds to travel to the South Seas. HD&L react in an
appropriately horrified -- and immediately repentant -- manner.
The
balance of "Wishing Stone Island" isn't as good as the buildup, since
the solution of the dilemma, of necessity, relies on a healthy slab of
old-fashioned "dumb luck." Both "Allowance Day" and "The Time Bandit,"
by contrast, get more interesting as they go along. The major
difference between the denouements of the two TV episodes, in my view,
is one of attitude. "Allowance Day" maintains what in my view is the
proper one -- that of comical danger -- while "The Time Bandit" goes
down what I consider to be a far darker, and ill-advised, path.
C'mon, guys... if you wanted to trick us into thinking that these were different plots,
then the least you could have done was to have used different dates.
Admittedly, while the notion of baffling any sizable
segment of society into thinking that it's got the day of the week
wrong is far-fetched on its (clock) face, the spreading of Baloo's fib
in "Time Bandit" makes a little more psychological sense, in that
one can (unfortunately) imagine the denizens of a totalitarian state
like Thembria being coerced into making the day-switch under pain of
death, or loss of the daily ration of turnip soup, or whatever. But
"Allowance Day" makes its fair share of sense as well. Aren't we all
familiar with the notion of people believing something because a trusted
"opinion leader" (or, even worse, a celebrity) advocated it, or because
they don't want to make it seem as though they are "out of the loop"?
Scrooge, despite his comparatively low public profile, would certainly
qualify as an "opinion leader," and one with massive economic clout to
boot. The use of Walter Kronduck (in his first appearance) as the
newscaster who reports on the confusion caused by the day-dilemma simply
amplifies the point, since the real Walter Kronkite was famously known
as "the most trusted man in America" (even though his news reporting was
actually just as subject to bias as any other news outlet's during the
era of "Big Media"). The rapidity of the spread of Scrooge's claim is
unquestionably unrealistic, but the societal insecurities that animate
it are not.
The fact that Scrooge disseminates the information about the "incorrect date" without leaving his mansion
is also a point in "Allowance Day"'s favor. Rebecca Cunningham's
bamboozlement is made easier by the simple fact that her daughter Molly
is conveniently absent for the duration. During her subsequent commute
to Higher for Hire, Becky also apparently neglected to ask anyone she
met in her apartment building or on the street about the correct date.
How convenient that the first person she asked just happened to be the
person who set up the scam in the first place.
Both
HD&L and Baloo "spill the beans" fairly early in the game, in
the sense that they leave themselves wide open to discovery, but I have
to disagree with Greg's contention that the Nephews' "blowing of their
cover" is a worse gaffe than Baloo's. Hauling cargo is Baloo's job,
and neglecting to take his Friday deliveries into consideration when
planning his scheme (especially when you consider how strict a stickler
for detail Becky is) strikes me as being a far more grievous error than
the Nephews' tongues slipping for just a moment. "Time Bandit"'s
problems are then compounded when Becky refuses to accept Baloo's
panicky confession and continues to believe that it is actually
Saturday. This is certainly in character for the stubborn business
lady, but it puts the onus for the continuation of the plot on both
Becky and Baloo. In "Allowance Day," Scrooge plays the role of a
victim and nothing more, which causes us to have some legitimate
sympathy for him when he finally does uncover the truth.
The
two plotlines diverge for good and all once we "go on remote location"
to The Banana Republic and Thembria. The Republic's stereotypical
General Chiquita may indeed be "racially problematic," as
GeoX claims, but the use of such an obvious
trope
is oddly comforting, in the sense that it makes it easier to make light
of what, after all, degenerates into a potential case of capital
punishment for a trivial offense. So, too, does the presence of Fenton,
who appears here in what could be considered his first true
"supporting" role of the series. Even in "
The Land of Trala La,"
which was more of an ensemble-cast adventure than "Allowance Day,"
Fenton managed to steal the show with his concerns about losing his job
and his attempts to determine the truth behind Tralla La. Here, he's
just a McDuck employee trying to do his duty, only to get caught in the
middle of an unfortunate situation not of his own making. The fact that
Fenton can play a meaningful supporting part while not sucking up all
of the oxygen further legitimizes his stature as a worthy addition to
the show's cast.
"The
Time Bandit" suffers from the lack of such "softening agents" in
Thembria. Instead, we get absurdist court and jail scenes that are
supposed to make us laugh but fail to do so, simply because
we have had experience with such scenarios in the real world.
Indeed, they continue to exist to this day, and will do so until all
remnants of totalitarian (as opposed to "merely" authoritarian) regimes
are wiped out of existence. When Becky is railroaded into accepting
"responsibility" for Baloo's "crime," that is bad enough, but then
Koonce and Wiemers gleefully pile on, trying to mine chortles out of
Becky's subsequent agony. The whole farce reaches its grotesque climax
when Becky is put through the "This Was Your Life" routine before the
execution. It legitimately troubles me that K&W thought that
this routine was funny. It's not. It's
painful. In fact, I think it's the absolute low point of the entire
TaleSpin series.
[Insert laugh track here]
"Allowance Day"'s "cannon squad" sequence may not be all that side-splitting, but at least it's not
mean-spirited.
How could it be when Fenton is present to lighten the mood with his
attempts to kill time while the Gizmosuit is on its way. If you're
going to do comedy related to an execution, then this is the way to
execute it (pun intended). The gag concerning Scrooge's unwillingness
to part with a dime to make a "last phone call" -- a gag that, thanks to
technological advances, has lost much of its real-world relevance in
the ensuing years, yet still manages to work -- is also an inspired
touch, especially when we get the (literal) payoff with Gizmoduck.
Unfortunately, I do have to raise the eternally salient point that
Gizmo's last-second arrival should have tipped HD&L off to the
fact that Fenton and Gizmoduck are one and the same. The boys have even
less of an excuse to miss the obvious here than they did in "Trala La,"
since Fenton was right there on the scene when the transition to
Gizmoduck took place.
The cloudplowing/eclipse-or-comet-viewing sequences are virtually identical in both episodes, though I think that
TaleSpin
handles its particular sequence a bit better. Kit Cloudkicker, after
all, got his name from... well, kicking clouds. I can buy him using his
airfoil to push clouds aside more easily than I can the late-arriving
Gizmoduck using his
hands to shove that one remaining cloud out of the way. The use of a comet as the date-establishing McGuffin in the
TaleSpin
setting also gets around the problem (mentioned by Greg) of the
characters in "Allowance Day" just happening to have equipment for
viewing an eclipse on their persons when the event takes place. Junior
Woodchucks may always be prepared, but everyone
else? I'm not so
sure. If "The Time Bandit" gets a credit here, it also accumulates an
unnecessary debit when Koonce and Weimers symbolically slap the viewers
in the face with a wet string of spaghetti by having Baloo respond to
Kit's "put on a happy face" quote with the line, "Now
why does
that sound familiar?". For what should be obvious reasons, I think that
any further references to "familiarity" in this case are rather...
unwise.
Of
course, Baloo ultimately pays for his peccadillo by being forced to go
on a date with Broadcast Sally, while HD&L... do not. At least,
not on screen. I'd like to think that Scrooge eventually chased the
boys down and "convinced" them to give back those extra dollars.
Overall,
as if it wasn't already pretty obvious, I prefer "Allowance Day"'s
version of this plotline. Having relatives who lived behind the Iron
Curtain unquestionably plays a role in my feelings, but, even if you
don't
have that background, I can't imagine how one could watch both eps and
not feel that "Allowance Day" struck the proper balance between
seriousness and silliness. Even so, I can certainly appreciate the
sentiments of those who prefer "The Time Bandit." I just don't happen
to share those sentiments.
.
.
.
Bumper #13: "Bolivar" (well, who else could it be?)
.
.
.
"DuckBlurbs"
(GeoX) ...the Walter-Cronkite-equivalent newscaster sez "Saddest of all are those
people who missed their Friday birthdays--now they're not sure how old
they are." It's a funny line, but it indicates an awareness that a day
did indeed disappear, which seems contrary to the general consensus; ie,
that Friday DID happen and everyone just somehow forgot about it.
Considering that there
IS
some societal uncertainty about the truth -- in the "DUCK-TV poll"
related by Kronduck, 19% of those polled still held out for it being
Friday -- I can accept the denizens of Duckburg believing both theories.
("Christopher" commenting on GeoX's review) Although I like Fenton, he had an annoying tendency to hijack episodes
half way through and turn them into Gizmoduck stories. This episode is a
prime example - it starts of as a classic screwball comedy plot with
heavy shades of "The Emperor's New Clothes", and you're all set to watch
the boys set everything right, and then suddenly it's all about Fenton
fighting the baddies again. Sigh.
In truth, Fenton doesn't actually
fight
the baddies; the Gizmosuit simply arrives in time to stop the
cannonballs. Whatever post-execution dust-up might have ensued is
short-circuited when Chiquita says that the Ducks can leave (huh? What
about that assault charge?)
.
(Greg) So we end
with the shot of a neon board changing to Saturday and everyone
shrugs. Hey there's the sea captain from Down And Out In Duckburg in
the foreground I do believe (second appearance in this episode.).
Yes, he can also be seen at the start (check the title card). However, Captain Jack from "Down and Out" was a pigface.
This guy was the ship's captain in "
Pearl of Wisdom," if I'm not mistaken.
(Greg) Anyhow; in comes
Mrs. Quackenbush (and I shutter to think who is voicing her now)...
It's
Susan Blu this time. I speculated during my review of "
My Mother the Psychic" that this episode and "Psychic" may have been recorded at the same time, since Blu and
Alan Oppenheimer were in the supporting cast in both cases.
(Greg) The
nephews decide to buy the scooter early and head to the store as the
salesman informs him that the sale is over because it is Saturday and
he heard it from the news; and he is not going to believe the word of
Louie the prankster. Nice bit of detail there guys. The salesman
walks out as the nephews proclaim that they outsmarted themselves... Problem with this
though is: If the sale ended on Friday; then even if they got their
allowances on Friday, the sale would have ended on Friday and thus
the price would go up anyway. Logic break #1 for the episode right
there.
Presumably, the store would have
remained open on Friday long enough for the boys to get there and buy
the scooter. I interpreted "the sale ends on Friday" to mean that the
sale ended once Friday ended.
(Greg) Fenton crawls to the payphone and speaks 555-Gizmo. That's
555-44966. Yeah; it doesn't make any sense; which is understandable
since kids would mimic this thinking that they are calling Gizmo
Duck.
I heard it as "555-GZMO."
(Greg) Chikitia points out that there is still one
cloud left and thus there is no way to see the eclipse. But the
darkness would come during a solar eclipse and thus that would proof
enough to be Friday. Idiots!
I do think that the comet in "The Time Bandit" was a better choice than the eclipse for precisely this reason.
.
.
.
Well, now I'm back in harness.
Thanks
for your patience during the longer-than-expected hiatus. I'm in the
middle of my May Term class but hope to keep to a one- or
two-episode-per-week pace for most of the rest of the Summer, at least
until my surgery.
Next: Episode 79, "Bubbeo and Juliet."
